It probably would look better like that, but I didn't even originally plan to have Perish Song in this, I just thought of it when I was colouring so I had to wing it rather than planning it out. Plus with Altaira being a somewhat peaceful Pokémon, having it use something more... Sinister looking might not blend too well. But thanks for your input :)
I could, but since that's not actually a move I think I'll just stick with Perish Song. I am kinda surprised something like that doesn't exist though, closest thing I can think of is Healing Wish.
Well different strokes for different folks. Plus I never go back to an old drawing to change things around, if I did that nothing new would ever get done.